Engaging in a collaborative space: exploring the substance and impact of peer review conversations
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Peer review offers benefits to post-secondary students and their instructors. In recent years, some instructors have shifted to virtual means of student peer review; however, face-to-face peer review is still a viable option. This mixed-methods study explored the substance of peer review conversations, as well as their impact on students’ academic writing, in a graduate-level research design course. Discourse analyses revealed that all peer review conversations displayed high levels of engagement. Results demonstrated that all students provided substantive comments to their peers, regardless of their scores on pre-draft papers. Peers consistently used mitigating and empathetic language with one another, which may have afforded students a better conduit for sharing constructive feedback. Final analyses of post-drafts revealed that students made revisions that aligned directly with peer feedback, which collectively resulted in higher post-draft scores. Conclusions underline that face-to-face peer review can support students academically and emotionally and encourage them to improve their writing.
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In Lineback and Holbrook (2023), 14 out of 15 students improved their overall scores, and 13 students made at least one discernible change attributable to peer feedback.
“The results of this study revealed that 14 out of 15 students experienced an improvement in their overall scores, with 13 students implementing at least one discernible change that could be directly attributed to the influence of peer feedback.”
From Incorporating peer feedback in academic writing: a systematic review of benefits and challenges (2024) · cites this paper as Lineback and Holbrook (2023)
Dialogue aids the peer feedback process in clarifying cognitive conflicts and supporting students emotionally, thereby facilitating revision.
“Dialogue not only aids the peer feedback process in clarifying cognitive conflicts (Wu and Lei, 2023), but also in supporting students emotionally (Lineback and Holbrook, 2023), thereby facilitating the revision process.”
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- Authors
- Lineback, J. E., & Holbrook, E.
- Affiliations
- Point Loma Nazarene University (US)
- Corresponding author
- Lineback, Jennifer Evarts
- Venue
- Assessment & Evaluation in Higher Education
- Publisher
- Informa UK Limited
- Published
- 2023-12-11
- Volume
- 49
- Issue
- 4
- Pages
- 556-571
- ISSN
- 0260-2938 (ISSN-L)
- 1469-297X
- OpenAlex
- W4389546894
- Cited by
- 3
- References
- 7
- Citations by year
- 2026: 2 · 2024: 1
- FWCI
- 2.22
- Type
- journal article
- Language
- en
- Open access
- closed
- Locations
- Assessment & Evaluation in Higher Education (publishedVersion)
- Topics
- Social Sciences › Education › Student Assessment and Feedback
- Social Sciences › Education › Evaluation of Teaching Practices
- Social Sciences › Psychology › Developmental and Educational Psychology › Innovative Teaching and Learning Methods
- Keywords
- peer review, peer feedback, academic writing, writing revision, graduate students, peer engagement, empathetic language, student-instructor interaction
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