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Enhancing English as a foreign language university students’ writing through explicit instruction of conjunctions as cohesive devices: An experimental study

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Alawerdy, Arwa Saleh, Alalwi, Fahd Shehail·2022·Frontiers in Psychology

Abstract

Cohesion has long been regarded as one of the main components of successful writing. The basic assumption of this concept is that the interpretation of one element in a text is based on the interpretation of another in the same text. It has been noticed that Saudi EFL students seem to lack some basics in writing a cohesive paragraph. Certain conjunctions were overused, underused, or misused. The present empirical study, therefore, attempted to investigate the impact of explicit teaching of conjunctions as cohesive devices on the development of paragraph writing. The subjects of this study were 43 EFL students at a Saudi University studying in the first year. Data were collected from pre and post tests and analyzed qualitatively and quantitatively. Results showed significant differences between the experimental and control groups in the post test. Pedagogical implications are presented.

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This experimental study found that explicit instruction of conjunctions as cohesive devices improved Saudi EFL university students’ paragraph writing. The experimental group significantly outperformed the control group on the post-test, with gains in both conjunction knowledge and use.

Key findings

  • On the written diagnostic test post-test, the experimental group scored significantly higher (Mean = 17.76, SD = 6.05) than the control group (Mean = 10.68, SD = 6.21), t = 3.783, p = 0.000.
  • The experimental group improved significantly from pre-test (Mean = 11.14) to post-test (Mean = 17.76), p = 0.000; the control group’s pre-to-post change (Mean = 9.5 to 10.68) was not significant, p = 0.069.
  • In the pre-paragraph writing test, causal devices were most used (34.72%), followed by additive (31.94%), temporal (30.56%), and adversative (2.78%). In the post-test, the experimental group used 124 conjunctive ties versus 53 in the control group; overall, additives ranked first (36.16%), temporal second (31.64%), causal third (22.60%), and adversative fourth (9.60%).
  • Qualitatively, the experimental group used more varied conjunctions after instruction (e.g., “moreover,” “furthermore,” “on the other hand,” “as a result,” “to sum up”), while the control group continued to rely on simple items.

Methods

  • An experimental and control group design with pre- and post-tests was used. Participants were 43 EFL students in the Preparatory Year Program at Prince Sattam bin Abdulaziz University, Saudi Arabia, randomly selected from two classes and divided into an experimental group (n = 21) and a control group (n = 22); the Oxford Placement Test was used to check homogeneity/proficiency.
  • Instruments included the Oxford Placement Test, a written diagnostic test on conjunctions adapted from Yousif (2021) with three sections, and a paragraph writing test of about 100–150 words scored with a rubric adopted from Abdelreheim (2014).
  • The experimental group received five 30-minute oral sessions, one per week, on cohesion and conjunctions based on Halliday and Hasan’s (1976) taxonomy; the control group studied the same course material without explicit instruction. Data were analyzed quantitatively with t-tests in SPSS for the written diagnostic test and qualitatively through frequency counts and expert rubric evaluation for the paragraph writing test.

Limitations

  • Stated: the authors recommend research on larger samples and at different levels of study to generalize the results, and note that the study was confined to conjunctions as a predictor of cohesion, suggesting more studies on additional types of cohesiveness and complementary use of conjunctions.
  • Evident from the text: participants were 43 female students in one preparatory-year engineering track at a single Saudi university, and the intervention was brief (five 30-minute sessions), which limits generalizability.
  • Evident from the text: no delayed post-test is reported, so longer-term retention of the instructional effects is not established.

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  • The paper relies on this without support.

    Saudi EFL first-year students lack some basics in writing a cohesive paragraph.

    “It has been noticed that Saudi EFL students seem to lack some basics in writing a cohesive paragraph.”
    “It has been observed that EFL students in their first year of study in Saudi Arabia lack some basics in writing a cohesive paragraph.”
  • The paper relies on this without support.

    Saudi EFL students tend to overuse, underuse, and misuse certain conjunctions.

    “Certain conjunctions were overused, underused, or misused.”
    “They tend to overuse, underuse, and misuse certain conjunctions.”
  • The authors state this as an assumption.

    The interpretation of one element in a text is based on the interpretation of another element in the same text.

    “The basic assumption of this concept is that the interpretation of one element in a text is based on the interpretation of another in the same text.”
  • The paper relies on this without support.

    The experimental and control groups were equivalent in all relevant respects other than the intervention, so the post-test difference can be attributed to the intervention.

    “Before any intervention, a pre- WDT was administered to all participants to ensure that both groups were on the same level and had equivalent knowledge of conjunctions.”
  • The paper relies on this without support.

    The WDT is a valid measure of students' knowledge and application of conjunctions.

    “The results of pre- and post-WDT were analyzed quantitatively using t-test with SPSS.”
  • The paper relies on this without support.

    The rubric and expert panel validly assess the appropriateness of conjunctions in PWT paragraphs.

    “As for the PWT, paragraphs were analyzed qualitatively as frequencies of conjunctions were counted and their appropriateness was evaluated by a panel of experts using the rubric mentioned above.”
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  1. Alalwi, 2021, Attitudes of saudi common first year students towards english as a foreign language., Asian ESP J., 17, 33
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  3. Arabi, 2014, Explication of conjunction errors in a corpus of written discourse by sudanese english majors., Arab World Engl. J., 5, 111
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  6. Folse, 2020, Great writing 2: Great paragraphs.
  7. Halliday, 1976, Cohesion in english (English language series; NO. 9)
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  9. Tsareva, 2010, Grammatical cohesion in argumentative essays by Norwegean and Russian learners
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Authors
Alawerdy, A. S., & Alalwi, F. S.
Affiliations
Prince Sattam Bin Abdulaziz University (SA)
Corresponding author
Alalwi, Fahd Shehail
Venue
Frontiers in Psychology
Published
2022-11-28
Volume
13
Pages
1053310-1053310
ISSN
1664-1078 (ISSN-L)
OpenAlex
W4310261181
Cited by
30
References
16
Citations by year
2026: 20 · 2025: 3 · 2024: 5 · 2023: 2
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6.61
Type
journal article
Language
en
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  • Frontiers in Psychology (publishedVersion, cc-by)
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  • PubMed (publishedVersion)
  • DOAJ (DOAJ: Directory of Open Access Journals) (submittedVersion, cc-by-sa)
Funders
  • Prince Sattam bin Abdulaziz University
  • Deanship of Scientific Research, Prince Sattam bin Abdulaziz University
Topics
  • Social Sciences › Arts and Humanities › Language and Linguistics › EFL/ESL Teaching and Learning
  • Social Sciences › Psychology › Developmental and Educational Psychology › Second Language Acquisition and Learning
  • Social Sciences › Linguistics and Language › Discourse Analysis in Language Studies
Keywords
conjunctions, cohesion, EFL writing, explicit instruction, paragraph writing, cohesive devices, Saudi EFL learners, university students

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