Human origins and the transition from promiscuity to pair-bonding
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A crucial step in recent theories of human origins is the emergence of strong pair-bonding between males and females accompanied by a dramatic reduction in the male-to-male conflict over mating and an increased investment in offspring. How such a transition from promiscuity to pair-bonding could be achieved is puzzling. Many species would, indeed, be much better off evolutionarily if the effort spent on male competition over mating was redirected to increasing female fertility or survivorship of offspring. Males, however, are locked in a “social dilemma,” where shifting one’s effort from “appropriation” to “production” would give an advantage to free-riding competitors and therefore, should not happen. Here, I first consider simple models for four prominent scenarios of the human transition to pair-bonding: communal care, mate guarding, food for mating, and mate provisioning. I show that the transition is not feasible under biologically relevant conditions in any of these models. Then, I show that the transition can happen if one accounts for male heterogeneity, assortative pair formation, and evolution of female choice and faithfulness. This process is started when low-ranked males begin using an alternative strategy of female provisioning. At the end, except for the top-ranked individuals, males invest exclusively in provisioning females who have evolved very high fidelity to their mates. My results point to the crucial importance of female choice and emphasize the need for incorporating between-individual variation in theoretical and empirical studies of social dilemmas and behaviors.
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By promoting exclusive devotion to a single mate, oxytocin may open an evolutionary path to biparental care and shift male competition toward in-group cooperation.
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The Discussion says pair-bonding opened a path to greater male parental investment and redirected potentially destructive competition for mates toward becoming better providers. The introduction also links pair-bonding to parental partnership and within-group cooperation. Our copy does not identify oxytocin as the cause of these changes; searches for oxytocin and related terms found no such passage. (LLM, conf=0.86)
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- Authors
- Gavrilets, S.
- Affiliations
- Department of Ecology and Evolutionary Biology, Department of Mathematics, and National Institute for Mathematical and Biological Synthesis, University of Tennessee, Knoxville, TN 37996
- Venue
- Proceedings of the National Academy of Sciences
- Publisher
- National Academy of Sciences
- Published
- 2012-05-29
- Volume
- 109
- Issue
- 25
- Pages
- 9923-9928
- ISSN
- 0027-8424 (ISSN-L)
- 1091-6490
- PMC
- PMC3382477
- OpenAlex
- W2167601923
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- 173
- References
- 90
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- FWCI
- 19.70
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- journal article
- Language
- en
- Open access
- green
- www.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov
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- Proceedings of the National Academy of Sciences (publishedVersion)
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- Topics
- Social Sciences › Psychology › Experimental and Cognitive Psychology › Evolutionary Psychology and Human Behavior
- Social Sciences › Sociology and Political Science › Evolutionary Game Theory and Cooperation
- Life Sciences › Agricultural and Biological Sciences › Ecology, Evolution, Behavior and Systematics › Animal Behavior and Reproduction
- Keywords
- human origins, pair bonding, promiscuity, male-male competition, social dilemmas, communal care, mate guarding, female mate choice, female fidelity, assortative mating, between-person variation, evolutionary game theory
- MeSH terms
- Conflict, Psychological, Female, Humans, Male, Sexual Behavior
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