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Automatic identification of knowledge‐transforming content in argument essays developed from multiple sources

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Raković, Mladen, Winne, Philip H., Marzouk, Zahia, Chang, Daniel·2021·Journal of Computer Assisted Learning

Abstract

Developing knowledge‐transforming skills in writing may help students increase learning by actively building knowledge, regardless of the domain. However, many undergraduate students struggle to transform knowledge when drafting essays based on multiple sources. Writing analytics can be used to scaffold knowledge transforming as writers bring evidence to bear in supporting claims. We investigated how to automatically identify sentences representing knowledge transformation in argumentative essays. A synthesis of cognitive theories of writing and Bloom's typology identified 22 linguistic features to model processes of knowledge transforming in a corpus of 38 undergraduates' essays. Findings indicate undergraduates mostly paraphrase or copy information from multiple sources rather than engage deeply with sources' content. Eight linguistic features were important for discriminating evidential sentences as telling versus transforming source knowledge. We trained a machine learning algorithm that accurately classified nearly three of four evidential sentences as knowledge‐telling or knowledge‐transforming, offering potential for use in future research.

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    Two thirds of all evidential sentences in the corpus were knowledge-telling.

    “Two thirds of all evidential sentences were knowledge-telling indicating undergraduates mostly paraphrase or copy information from sources rather than deeply engage with the source material.”
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    The coefficient of knowledge transforming positively but weakly correlated with essay scores assigned by the course instructor.

    “The coefficient of knowledge transforming positively but weakly correlated with essay scores assigned by the course instructor.”
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    A synthesis of cognitive theories of writing and Bloom's typology identified 22 linguistic features to model cognitive processes in knowledge transforming.

    “A synthesis of cognitive theories of writing and Bloom's typology identified 22 linguistic features to model cognitive processes in knowledge transforming, a methodological contribution to research on multi-source based writing.”
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    The machine learning algorithm accurately classified nearly 3 of 4 evidential sentences as knowledge-telling or knowledge-transforming.

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    The reliability issue lay in identifying sentences that did not fit any argumentation category, due to coders' failures to capture all NA sentences.

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    Eight linguistic features were important predictors of whether an evidential sentence tells or transforms source knowledge: relative position of an evidential sentence in a paragraph, absolute distance between an evidential sentence and the most recent argument, incidence of low-and high-accessibility anaphoric devices, incidence of rhetorical connectives that indicate reasoning, content-word over

    “Eight linguistic features were important predictors of whether an evidential sentence tells or transforms source knowledge: relative position of an evidential sentence in a paragraph, absolute distance between an evidential sentence and the most recent argument, incidence of low-and high-accessibility anaphoric devices, incidence of rhetorical connectives that indicate reasoning, content-word over”
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    For Writing mode, coders struggled to discriminate synthesis from analysis, and analysis from comprehension.

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    Among four supervised machine learning algorithms, logistic regression had low prediction accuracy (nearly .57), while the other algorithms performed similarly (accuracy between .71 and .73).

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    In the content problem space, three linguistic features are important predictors of knowledge transforming: content-word overlap between evidential sentence and source text, semantic overlap between evidential sentence and preceding argument, and semantic overlap between evidential sentence and source text.

    “In the content problem space, three linguistic features are important predictors of knowledge transforming: content-word overlap between evidential sentence and source text, semantic overlap between evidential sentence and preceding argument, and semantic overlap between evidential sentence and source text.”
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    The probabilities for Pos_Arg_Ev < 0 could not be considered reliable because only 10 such sentences were found.

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    Evidential sentences with evidence-argument semantic overlap (Sol_A) between 10% and 70% are moderately likely to transform source knowledge, and this likelihood drops outside that interval.

    “Further, the sentences having evidence-argument semantic overlap (Sol_A) on the interval 10% -70% are moderately likely to transform source knowledge.However, this likelihood drops for sentences where Sol_A is outside this interval.”
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    Only 12 evidential sentences had negative semantic overlap with the argument.

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    Claim(s) usually occupy the upper third of a paragraph, knowledge-transforming sentences most often come in the middle (usually within a 3-sentence window from claim), and their occurrence drops drastically in the lower third.

    “From the structural point of view, claim(s) usually occupy the upper-third of a paragraph, knowledge-transforming sentences most often come in the middle (usually within a 3-sentence window from claim), and the occurrence of knowledge-transforming sentences drastically drops in the lower-third of paragraph.”
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    Multicollinearity testing found correlations above 0.50 between several predictor pairs: Simultaneous and Reason r=0.87; Sequential and Causal_Con r=0.70; Sol_A and CWol_A r=0.55.

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    In the 38 essays, 479 evidential sentences were knowledge-telling, representing 67.85% of all evidential sentences (M=12.61, SD=7.68 per essay).

    “479 sentences were categorized as knowledge-telling sentences (per essay: M=12.61,SD=7.68).This represents 67.85 % of all evidential sentences in 38 essays.”
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    The interactions between the content problem space and the rhetorical problem space in the knowledge-telling model are few and unproductive.

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    Most of the time knowledge-telling essays fail to fulfill what the writing task has demanded.

    “However, even though knowledge-telling compositions manage to tell relevant knowledge within the domain outlined by keywords of the assignment, most of the time these essays fail to fulfill what the writing task has demanded, i.e., convincing readers why plastic materials are harmful.”
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    The knowledge-transforming model consists of two problem spaces, rhetorical and content.

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    Developing knowledge-transforming skills in writing may help students improve their learning gains by actively building their knowledge, regardless of the domain.

    “Accordingly, developing knowledge-transforming skills in writing may help students improve their learning gains by actively building their knowledge, regardless of the domain (Bereiter & Scardamalia, 1987).”
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    The knowledge-telling model ignores making the connections among elements of content.

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    Knowledge transforming promotes learning.

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    Post-secondary students often fail to paraphrase, interpret, and evaluate content in sources.

    “Subsequent research following Bereiter and Scardamalia's (1987) research showed post-secondary students often failed to: paraphrase, interpret, and evaluate content in sources; establish novel associations across multiple sources; and integrate multiply-sourced information into coherent form (Stein, 1989;Dong, 1996;Petrić, 2007;Boscolo, Ariasi, Favero, & Ballarin, 2011;Aull, 2015).”
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    Interpretationreasoning

    These demands appear to prevent most postsecondary students from successfully engaging in knowledge transforming.

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    To meaningfully engage in knowledge-transforming processing, writers should engage constructive planning.

    “To meaningfully engage in knowledge-transforming processing, writers should engage constructive planning (Flower et al., 1989).”
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    Stein (1990) identified four major groups of cognitive processes that occur in reading and writing from multiple sources: planning, monitoring, elaborating, and structuring.

    “In their seminal work Stein (1990) identified four major groups of cognitive processes that occur in reading and writing from multiple sources: planning, monitoring, elaborating, and structuring.”
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    Knowledge telling is a component of the knowledge transforming process.

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    Tardy's study of initial master thesis and research paper drafts from two graduate students revealed challenges with structuring composition and evaluating source information to promote claims.

    “The initial master thesis and research paper drafts written by two graduate students participating in Tardy's (2005) study revealed challenges writers faced with structuring composition and evaluating source information to promote their claims in the draft.”
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    To reach high interrater agreement among the three coders, coding involved three rounds of training together, coding independently, and calculating reliability.

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    Stab and Gurevych found structural features were helpful in explaining differences between argumentative and non-argumentative units in text.

    “Stab and Gurevych (2017) found structural features were helpful in explaining differences between argumentative (thesis statement, sub-claim, evidence) and non-argumentative units in the text.”
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    According to Bereiter and Scardamalia's writing model, students engaged in knowledge telling neglect cognitive and metacognitive operations that transform knowledge.

    “According to Bereiter and Scardamalia's (1987) writing model, students engaged in knowledge telling neglect cognitive and metacognitive operations that transform knowledge.”
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    A writer's tendency to switch to knowledge telling under vague task requirements and avoid additional cognitive challenges is an explanation for the outcome, consistent with Weinstock's research.

    “First, a writer's tendency was to switch to knowledge telling in the context of vague task requirements and thus avoid additional cognitive challenges, which resonates with findings from Weinstock's (2010) research.”
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    Analyzing almost 2,000 citation instances, Petrić identified an overall tendency towards attribution.

    “Analyzing almost 2,000 instances of citation use in written texts, Petrić identified overall students' tendency towards attribution, a descriptive rhetorical function that”
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    Study design and conductreasoning

    The relative position of an evidential sentence in a paragraph identifies whether it appears toward the beginning, middle or end, allowing analysis of the relationship between position and writing mode.

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    Students had issues elaborating source materials and structuring and revising written composition.

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    The idea that a computer can offer scaffolding emerged from research on interactive learning environments.

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    The Open Essayist analyzes essay drafts using NLP and generates feedback about rhetoric and prompts reflection.

    “The Open Essayist (Whitelock, Twiner, Richardson, Field & Pulman, 2015) analyzes the essay draft using natural language processing (NLP) algorithms and generates feedback about rhetoric (e.g., most prominent words, representative sentences, essay's internal structure) and provides prompts that encourage the student's reflections on the draft.”
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    When the task is argumentative writing, this tendency leads to poorly articulated evidence and essays that lack persuasiveness.

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    Cognitive linguistics offers means of analyzing linguistic choices writers made while constructing meaning in genre-specific texts.

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    In argumentative writing, an argument expressed and supported in a body paragraph may be considered as comprised of building blocks that create particular rhetorical moves.

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    In Boscolo, Arfé and Quarisa's experiment, 52 undergraduate participants conceived academic writing as transforming knowledge from sources through elaboration and continuous revision rather than restating knowledge and providing personal points of view.

    “The 52 undergraduate participants in Boscolo, Arfé and Quarisa's (2007) experiment conceived academic writing as a means of transforming knowledge from other sources through elaboration and continuous revision, rather than through restating knowledge and providing personal points of view.”
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    After separate coding, inter-rater agreement was calculated using the AC1 statistic.

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    Novice writers can gradually hone task-relevant cognitive processes and increase their ability to monitor and control those processes until feedback is no longer needed.

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    Dong noted students' problems to paraphrase, interpret, synthesize, evaluate and integrate content from reading materials, and these skills present difficulties for both native and non-native English writers.

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    The linguistic features selected for this study are proxies of cognitive processes a writer applied to relay features of source knowledge and create evidential sentences.

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    The absolute distance feature combined with relative position may approximate a writer's engagement in text structuring and indirectly in constructive planning.

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    • The authors state this as an assumption: In a continuous sequence of claim sentences, the evidential sentence that follows the sequence is connected to the last claim in the sequence.
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    Interpretationreasoning

    The novel approach in this study addresses both rhetorical and content aspects of writing from multiple sources.

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    Petrić linked attribution to knowledge-telling and stated that attribution involves re-telling source content instead of building novel associations and elaborating sources with prior knowledge.

    “Petrić linked attribution to the knowledge-telling mode of writing and pointed out that, by engaging in attribution, students are just re-telling what is stated in the sources instead of building novel associations and elaborating sources using prior knowledge.”
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    Ineffective argument production could be further explained by a lack of metacognitive monitoring and control.

    “Their production of ineffective arguments could be further explained by a lack of metacognitive monitoring (e.g., for writing task and goals) and control (e.g., editing and revising the draft).”
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    To develop cognitive and self-regulatory processes that characterize knowledge transforming, writers need effortful and scaffolded writing practice within an authentic learning environment.

    “To develop cognitive and self-regulatory processes that characterize knowledge transforming, writers need to be engaged in effortful and scaffolded (i.e., externally supported) writing practice within an authentic learning environment (Proske, Narciss, & McNamara, 2012).”
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    The AC1 method corrects agreement among raters for chance and is robust to skewed distribution of coding categories.

    “This method corrects agreement among raters for the probability of chance agreement and is robust to skewed distribution of coding categories (Haley, Thomas, Petre, & De Roeck, 2008).”
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    Escribo scaffolds students by providing informational hints on how to collect source information, plan, write and revise essays.

    “Escribo (Proske et al., 2012) scaffolds students by providing informational hints (Roscoe, Varner, Crossley, & McNamara, 2013) on how to collect source information, plan, write and revise essays.”
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    Even in unambiguous task contexts, such as argumentative writing, post-secondary students still tend to engage in knowledge telling and have difficulty strategically using cognitive processes embedded in knowledge transforming.

    “However, as other studies reveal, even in contexts where the task requirements were unambiguous, such as an argumentative writing task investigated in this study, post-secondary students still tend to engage in knowledge telling, having hard times to strategically use cognitive processes embedded into knowledge transforming.”
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    Scholars in different fields could benefit from detailed methodology of cognitive linguistics.

    “Scholars in different fields could benefit from detailed methodology of cognitive linguistics (Croft & Cruse, 2004;Dancygier, 2017).”
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    Sanders and Schihperoord posited that text structure may provide insights into cognition applied in writing, arguing that appropriate analysis of written composition can reveal significant traces of the writer's cognitive representation.

    “In line with this, Sanders and Schihperoord (2006) posited the text structure may provide insights into cognition applied in writing, arguing appropriate analysis of written composition can reveal”
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    Across different levels of higher education, students appear to struggle applying cognitive and self-regulatory strategies that underlie this writing model.

    “The reviewed studies agree that, across different levels of higher education, students appear to struggle applying cognitive and self-regulatory strategies that underlie this writing model.”
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    The Web-Based Tutor lets students practice identifying elements of an argument using predefined formative feedback.

    “In the Web-Based Tutor (Wolfe, Britt, Petrovic, Albrecht, & Kopp, 2009) students practice identifying elements of an argument (main claim, reason, counterargument, and response to the counterargument) using predefined formative feedback.”
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    To model linguistic properties of knowledge-telling and knowledge-transforming discourses, it is important to understand cognitive processes writers use when developing text.

    “To model linguistic properties of knowledge-telling and knowledgetransforming discourses, it is important to understand cognitive processes writers use when developing text (Sanders & Spooren, 2007).”
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    Bereiter and Scardamalia emphasized the importance of the connection between linguistic research and cognitive models.

    “Moreover, Bereiter and Scardamalia (1987) emphasized the importance of the connection between linguistic research and cognitive models.”
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    Ariel distinguished between high- and low-accessibility anaphoric devices.

    “Ariel (1990) distinguished between high-and lowaccessibility anaphoric devices.”
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    The XIP Dashboard supports post-secondary writers in searching for relevant source content, classifies sentences by rhetorical functions, and provides learning analytics to instructors.

    “The XIP Dashboard (Simsek, Buckingham Shum, Sandor, De Liddo, & Ferguson, 2013) supports post-secondary writers in searching for relevant source content, classifies sentences according to their rhetorical functions (summarizing, background knowledge, contrasting ideas, novelty, significance, surprise, open question and generalization), and provides learning analytics to instructors.”
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    The aforementioned tools have demonstrated empirical benefits in supporting particular cognitive processes in learning contexts where reading and writing co-occur.

    “Aiming to support particular cognitive processes in learning contexts where reading and writing co-occur, the aforementioned tools have demonstrated empirical benefits.”
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    Interpretationreasoning

    Classifying students' evidential sentences in terms of Bloom's taxonomy forms a basis for analytics to guide students toward producing knowledge-transforming texts with arguments strengthened by more thorough articulation of content with evidence.

    “Thus, classifying students' evidential sentences in terms of Bloom's taxonomy forms a basis for analytics to guide students toward producing knowledge transforming texts with arguments strengthened by more thorough articulation of content with evidence.”
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    Acquisition of domain knowledge might not be accomplished to its greatest extent when students limit engagement to knowledge telling.

    “Moreover, the acquisition of the domain knowledge might not be accomplished to its greatest extent when students limit their engagement to knowledge telling (Bereiter & Scardamalia, 1987).”
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    • cites Bereiter & Scardamalia, 1987

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    Premisecitation

    According to Bransford, Barclay and Franks, sentences represent informational blocks that build wholistic semantic descriptions at a high level.

    “According to Bransford, Barclay and Franks (1972), sentences represent informational blocks that build wholistic semantic descriptions at a high level.”
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    Study design and conductreasoning

    Using Bloom's taxonomy to classify writers' evidential sentences could reflect underlying cognitive and metacognitive processes writers engage in.

    “Using Bloom's taxonomy to classify writers' evidential sentences could reflect underlying cognitive and metacognitive processes writers engage in.”
    Quote in the paperNot a substantial claim
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    Premisecitation

    Aull and Lancaster and Aull found that undergraduates lack text structuring strategies.

    “Aull and Lancaster ( 2014) and Aull (2015 undergraduates lack text structuring strategies.”
    Quote in the paperNot a substantial claim0 of 2 sources checked
    • cites Aull and Lancaster ( 2014)

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    • cites Aull (2015

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    Premisecitation

    The essays were assessed as moderately informative and cohesive, and poorly integrated and organized.

    “The essays were assessed as moderately informative and cohesive, and also poorly integrated and organized.”
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    • cites Boscolo, Arfé and Quarisa's (2007)

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    Premisecitation

    The authors linked this problem to students' negligence in reflecting on the writing process.

    “The authors linked this problem to students' negligence in reflecting on the writing process, explaining that although”
    Quote in the paperNot a substantial claim0 of 1 sources checked
    • cites Hyytinen, Löfström, and Lindblom-Ylänne's (2017)

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    Premisecitation

    Petrić developed a coding scheme of nine rhetorical functions for source and citation use in master students' writing.

    “Researching source and citation use in master students' writing, Petrić (2007) developed a coding scheme consisting of nine rhetorical functions: attribution, exemplification, further reference, statement of use, application, evaluation, establishing links between sources, comparison of one's own findings or interpretation with other sources, and other.”
    Quote in the paperNot a substantial claim0 of 1 sources checked
    • cites Petrić (2007)

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    Study design and conductcitation

    The model was selected using cross-validation on an 80% training sample and tested on a 20% hold-out sample.

    “Cross-validation was performed on the training data (80% sample of dataset), while 20% was the hold-out data for testing the model performance, following suggestions by Haykin (1994).”
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    • cites Haykin (1994)

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    Interpretationreasoning

    While marking, the instructor may focus on the relationship between a claim and relevant evidence in the rhetorical space.

    “While marking the argumentative essay, the instructor may focus on the relationship between a claim and relevant evidence in the rhetorical space (i.e., does the evidence support claim?).”
    Quote in the paperNot a substantial claim
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    Interpretationreasoning

    This pattern indicates a writer's tendency to generate text by referring to cues in already produced text while staying on topic defined by the argument.

    “This indicates a writer's tendency to generate text by referring to cues in text already produced, while staying on topic defined by the argument.”
    Quote in the paperNot a substantial claim
  • Probably not a substantial claim: may not pass S3 (load-bearing).

    Interpretationreasoning

    Many writers respond to task requirements by putting less cognitive effort into writing.

    “This finding reflects the idea that many writers are interested in responding to task requirements by putting less cognitive effort into it.”
    Quote in the paperNot a substantial claim
  • Classified as probably not a substantial claim.

    Premisecitation

    Knowledge and comprehension categories represent less complex cognitive engagement.

    “both categories representing less complex cognitive engagement (Agarwal, 2018)”
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    • cites Agarwal, 2018

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    Premisecitation

    Low-accessibility anaphoric devices are noun phrases and indefinite articles; they contain much linguistic material and signal termination of the current topic and activation of another.

    “Lowaccessibility anaphoric devices are noun phrases (e.g., bilingual children) and indefinite articles (a and an).Sanders and Spooren (2007) posit low-accessibility devices contain much linguistic material and, as such, signal a writer's termination of a current topic and activation of another topic.”
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    • cites Sanders and Spooren (2007)

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    Interpretationreasoning

    The result that content-word overlap is high for knowledge-transforming sentences may indicate that writers producing such sentences tended to engage in elaborating and structuring processes.

    “Although this metric was expected to be high for knowledge-telling sentences, the result may indicate that writers producing knowledge-transforming sentences tended to be engaged in elaborating and structuring processes of knowledge transforming.”
    Quote in the paperNot a substantial claim
  • Probably not a substantial claim: may not pass S3 (load-bearing).

    Premisecitation

    Petrić (2007) found that students generally repeated source content by summarizing, paraphrasing, or quoting it directly.

    “Petrić (2007) who reported an overall tendency of students to re-tell what is stated in sources by summarizing/paraphrasing or directly quoting it.”
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    • cites Petrić (2007)

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    Interpretationcitation

    The study's finding that undergraduates generally convey rather than transform source knowledge aligns with Petrić (2007).

    “This finding is in line with Petrić (2007)”
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    • cites Petrić (2007)

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    Interpretationcitation

    A noun-phrase-rich knowledge-transforming sentence immediately following an argument could be a proxy for elaboration.

    “For instance, a noun-phrase-rich knowledge-transforming sentence immediately following an argument could be a proxy for elaboration, one of the main cognitive processes in knowledge-transforming (Stein, 1989).”
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    • cites Stein, 1989

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    Interpretationreasoning

    Feedback on source content usage in argumentative essays has rarely been provided by instructors and has a meager effect on essay score.

    “For this reason, feedback on source content usage in the argumentative essay has been rarely provided by the instructors and this characteristic of writing therefore has a meager effect on the essay score.”
    Quote in the paperSubstantial claim
  • Probably not a substantial claim: may not pass S3 (load-bearing). May combine two claims.

    Premisecitation

    Hyytinen, Löfström, and Lindblom-Ylänne (2017), in an experiment with roughly three times as many compositions as this study, found that most students across multiple higher-education levels struggled to select relevant source information, link main ideas, and assess alternative positions in sources.

    “They demonstrated a vast majority of students from several levels of higher education faced challenges deciding on relevant source information, connecting main ideas and evaluating alternative positions presented in sources.”
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    Interpretationreasoning

    A scorer normally would not read sources a student cited to locate relevant information and assess transformation.

    “A scorer normally would not read sources a student cited (unless suspecting plagiarism) to locate relevant pieces of information and assess that information was transformed in evidential sentences.”
    Quote in the paperSubstantial claim
  • May combine two claims.

    Study design and conductreasoning

    These two types of linguistic markers are proxies for change in topic, which is one of the essential parameters distinguishing knowledge-telling from knowledge-transforming.

    “These two types of linguistic markers are proxies for change in topic which is one of the essential parameters distinguishing knowledge-telling from knowledgetransforming.”
    Quote in the paperSubstantial claim
  • Probably not a substantial claim: may not pass S3 (load-bearing).

    Interpretationreasoning

    The opposite effect could be explained by a writer's disposition to take advantage of a chain of reasoning already provided in a source and translate it into a composition, avoiding further transformation.

    “This could be explained by a writer's disposition to take the advantage of a chain of reasoning as already provided in a source article and just translate it into a composition, avoiding further transformation (e.g., by integrating that information with prior knowledge).”
    Quote in the paperNot a substantial claim
  • May combine two claims.

    Study design and conductreasoning

    The total essay score was selected for analysis because it and the evidence score correlate as much as reliability allows, making it a more conservative reference point.

    “Since the total essay score and evidence score correlate as much as reliability allows, the total essay score was selected for analysis as it would be a more conservative reference point.”
    Quote in the paperSubstantial claim
  • Probably not a substantial claim: may not pass S3 (load-bearing).

    Interpretationcitation

    The study's results resonate with the findings of Hyytinen, Löfström, and Lindblom-Ylänne's (2017) experiment.

    “This resonates with results of Hyytinen, Löfström, and Lindblom-Ylänne's (2017) experiment sampling about three times more compositions than in this study.”
    Quote in the paperNot a substantial claim0 of 1 sources checked
    • cites Hyytinen, Löfström, and Lindblom-Ylänne's (2017)

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    Premisecitation

    High-accessibility devices are pronouns and definite article; they contain less linguistic material and indicate continuation of the previous topic.

    “High-accessibility devices are pronouns (personal and possessive) and definite article (the).They contain less linguistic material (Sanders & Spooren, 2007) and indicate a writer's continuation of the previous topic.”
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    • cites Sanders & Spooren, 2007

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  • The paper relies on this without support.

    The essay scores assigned by the course instructor are a valid measure of essay quality.

    “The coefficient of knowledge transforming positively but weakly correlated with essay scores assigned by the course instructor.”
  • The paper relies on this without support.

    Writers who generate text by the knowledge-telling process typically underuse monitoring and planning needed to develop text coherence.

    “Writers who generate text by the knowledge-telling process typically underuse monitoring and planning needed to develop text coherence.”
  • The paper relies on this without support.

    Knowledge telling writers focus overly on how to generate basic text, e.g., staying on topic.

    “Rather, knowledge telling writers focus overly on how to generate basic text, e.g., staying on topic.”
  • The paper relies on this without support.

    These students tend to tell knowledge from sources they consult rather than transform knowledge they borrow.

    “These students tend to tell knowledge from sources they consult rather than transform knowledge they borrow.”
  • The paper relies on this without support.

    In the rhetorical problem space, many such writers fail to elaborate ideas mined from source texts, and list rather than structure propositions to form convincing arguments.

    “For example, in the rhetorical problem space, many such writers fail to elaborate ideas mined from source texts, and list rather than structure propositions to form convincing arguments.”
  • The paper relies on this without support.

    In the content problem space, they struggle to decide which source material is best to include in the essay.

    “In the content problem space, they struggle to decide which source material is best to include in the essay, don't recognize appropriate applications of prior knowledge about the essay topic, and overlook useful linking of information across multiple sources.”
  • The paper relies on this without support.

    They don't recognize appropriate applications of prior knowledge about the essay topic.

    “In the content problem space, they struggle to decide which source material is best to include in the essay, don't recognize appropriate applications of prior knowledge about the essay topic, and overlook useful linking of information across multiple sources.”
  • The paper relies on this without support.

    They overlook useful linking of information across multiple sources.

    “In the content problem space, they struggle to decide which source material is best to include in the essay, don't recognize appropriate applications of prior knowledge about the essay topic, and overlook useful linking of information across multiple sources.”
  • The paper relies on this without support.

    Metacognitive monitoring and control strategies interweave during knowledge-transformative writing.

    “Metacognitive monitoring and control strategies interweave during knowledgetransformative writing.”
  • The paper relies on this without support.

    Knowledge transforming is a highly demanding and challenging task where multiple cognitive and metacognitive processes interweave.

    “Knowledge transforming is considered a highly demanding and challenging task where multiple cognitive and metacognitive processes interweave.”
  • The paper relies on this without support.

    The 22 linguistic features adequately capture the cognitive processes of knowledge transforming.

    “A synthesis of cognitive theories of writing and Bloom's typology identified 22 linguistic features to model cognitive processes in knowledge transforming, a methodological contribution to research on multi-source based writing.”
  • The paper relies on this without support.

    The coefficient of knowledge transforming computed from the algorithm is a valid measure of knowledge transforming in essays.

    “A corpus of 38 undergraduates' essays was examined using this algorithm and a coefficient of knowledge transforming was computed for each essay.”
  • The authors state this as an assumption.

    In a continuous sequence of claim sentences, the evidential sentence that follows the sequence is connected to the last claim in the sequence.

    “In case a continuous sequence of claim sentences is provided, I assume that evidential sentence that comes after this sequence is connected to the last claim in the sequence.”
  • The paper relies on this without support.

    The LSA training corpus adequately represents the semantics of domain knowledge in educational psychology.

    “I chose this set of texts to train the LSA model since this corpus well represents semantics of domain knowledge in educational psychology.”
  • The paper relies on this without support.

    The topics students wrote about in their essays relate to concepts in educational psychology.

    “Moreover, the topics students wrote about in their essays relate to concepts in educational psychology.”
  • The paper relies on this without support.

    Content words are helpful in modeling the variance of content.

    “Content words are deemed helpful in modeling the variance of content in the Synonyms were taken into account in calculation of these features.”
  • The paper relies on this without support.

    The random forest algorithm provides means to reliably measure and report variable importance.

    “Also, this algorithm provides means to reliably measure and report variable importance, which is needed to answer RQ4 in this study.”
  • The paper relies on this without support.

    Semantic similarity measures ensure that content used to support arguments is appropriate given the cited source.

    “Semantic similarity measures help to ensure that content the writer employed to support arguments is appropriate given the textual source cited.”
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Statistics recomputed

Every reported test result, recomputed from its test statistic and degrees of freedom. A result shows as not adding up only once an independent check has confirmed it.

  • Not confirmedt(38) = -2.001reported p = .052 · recomputed p = .053

    “t(38) = -2.001,p = .052”

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Self-check

Percentages, sums and reported differences re-computed from the paper’s own numbers.

Each contradiction between two passages listed here was confirmed by an independent check.

  • An absolute distance is later described as negative

    Minor

    The feature is defined as an absolute count of sentences separating evidence from a preceding claim. The results then assign it negative values for evidence appearing before a claim, which cannot be values of that defined absolute distance.

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Cites

Flagged first, then by citations

Research works printed but not linked: 6

  1. Darwazeh A. N., 2017, A new revision of the [revised] Bloom's taxonomy, Distance Learning, 14, 13
  2. Gwet K., 2002, Kappa statistic is not satisfactory for assessing the extent of agreement between raters, Statistical methods for inter‐rater reliability assessment, 1, 1
  3. Raković M., 2019, Companion proceedings 9th international conference on learning analytics & knowledge (LAK19)
  4. Rehurek R., 2010, Proceedings of the LREC 2010 workshop on new challenges for NLP frameworks
  5. Simsek D., 2013, 1st international workshop on discourse‐centric learning analytics, at 3rd international conference on learning analytics & knowledge. April 8–12, 2013
  6. Stein V., 1989, Elaboration: Using what you know (reading‐to‐write report no. 6)

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Sorted by citations

Authors
Raković, M., Winne, P. H., Marzouk, Z., & Chang, D.
Affiliations
  • Monash University (AU)
  • Simon Fraser University (CA)
  • Kwantlen Polytechnic University (CA)
Corresponding author
Raković, Mladen
Venue
Journal of Computer Assisted Learning
Publisher
Wiley
Published
2021-02-15
Volume
37
Issue
4
Pages
903-924
ISSN
  • 0266-4909 (ISSN-L)
  • 1365-2729
OpenAlex
W2997152227
Cited by
26
References
74
Citations by year
2026: 5 · 2025: 4 · 2024: 7 · 2023: 3 · 2022: 4 · 2021: 2 · 2013: 1
FWCI
3.38
Type
journal article
Language
en
Open access
Locations
  • Journal of Computer Assisted Learning (publishedVersion)
  • Summit (Simon Fraser University) (submittedVersion, other-oa)
  • Summit (Simon Fraser University) (submittedVersion)
Funders
Simon Fraser University
Topics
  • Physical Sciences › Computer Science › Computer Science Applications › Online Learning and Analytics
  • Social Sciences › Arts and Humanities › Literature and Literary Theory › Discourse Analysis in Language Studies
  • Social Sciences › Psychology › Developmental and Educational Psychology › Educational Strategies and Epistemologies
Keywords
knowledge transformation, argumentative essay, writing analytics, paraphrase, source integration, Bloom's taxonomy, automatic classification, undergraduate writing, machine learning classification, linguistic features

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Registry, retraction, Cites and statistics results are computed, not judged, with one exception: a printed reference that no index lists is read once by a model before it counts as a citation error. Claims are extracted by a model and kept only when their quote appears verbatim in the text; each cited source is then checked, with a model’s help, for whether it says what the claim relies on. Those verdicts can be wrong — read the claim’s quote and the cited source before relying on one.

Claims read by deepseek-v4.1-flash under definition version 3 (extract-v3) on 2026-09-29.

Classified by jev-1.13-20260917 (gold-guideline-v0.2) on 2026-09-29.

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