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Worked example or scripting? Fostering students’ online argumentative peer feedback, essay writing and learning
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This study compared the effects of worked example and scripting on students’ argumentative peer feedback, essay and learning qualities. Participants were 80 BSc students who were randomly divided over 40 dyads and assigned to two experimental conditions (worked example and scripting). An online peer feedback environment named EduTech was designed and students were tasked with writing an argumentative essay, engaging in peer feedback, and revising their essay. The results indicate that students in the scripting condition benefited more than students in the worked example condition regarding peer feedback quality. Furthermore, the scores of students in both conditions improved from pre-test to post-test in terms of argumentative essay writing and learning. This difference was significant, however, between the two conditions only with regard to argumentative essay writing favoring the scripting condition. We explain how each of these approaches can be used to improve students’ argumentative peer feedback and essay writing and learning.
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- Authors
- Latifi, S., Noroozi, O., & Talaee, E.
- Affiliations
- Kharazmi University (IR)
- Wageningen University & Research (NL)
- Tarbiat Modares University (IR)
- Corresponding author
- Noroozi, Omid
- Venue
- Interactive Learning Environments
- Publisher
- Informa UK Limited
- Published
- 2020-08-01
- Volume
- 31
- Issue
- 2
- Pages
- 655-669
- ISSN
- 1049-4820 (ISSN-L)
- 1744-5191
- OpenAlex
- W3046276216
- Cited by
- 107
- References
- 71
- Citations by year
- 2026: 23 · 2025: 17 · 2024: 22 · 2023: 22 · 2022: 18 · 2021: 4 · 2020: 1
- FWCI
- 16.99
- Type
- journal article
- Language
- en
- Open access
- hybrid
- doi.org
- Licence
- Locations
- Interactive Learning Environments (publishedVersion, cc-by-nc-nd)
- Socio-Environmental Systems Modeling (submittedVersion, cc-by-nc-nd)
- Data Archiving and Networked Services (DANS) (submittedVersion, other-oa)
- Topics
- Social Sciences › Psychology › Developmental and Educational Psychology › Innovative Teaching and Learning Methods
- Social Sciences › Education › Student Assessment and Feedback
- Social Sciences › Psychology › Experimental and Cognitive Psychology › Visual and Cognitive Learning Processes
- Keywords
- worked examples, scripting, argumentative essay writing, online peer feedback, essay revision, argumentation, university students
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